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Proudnoob4
Posts : 49 Join date : 2015-06-13
| Subject: Art Critique Please ! Sun Oct 02, 2016 6:25 pm | |
| Hello i made some art for G.U.N Please if you have any critiques it will be greatly appreciated !
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| | | IIHawkerII
Posts : 519 Join date : 2015-03-18 Age : 31 Location : Nu Ziland
Character sheet Name: Conroy El Cadera Faction: Independant Level: 49
| Subject: Re: Art Critique Please ! Sun Oct 02, 2016 10:06 pm | |
| I love your work with the lighting in this picture! That being said, there's a few bits I'd like to draw your attention to. (It is a critique after all. =P )
-First thing is the lettering on the flag, you've done a pretty good job of re-sizing the letters to simulate the waving of the flag, the only thing I can see there worth fixing is the 'N', I'd say make it a little larger, about (Or close to.) the size of the 'G'. Might help fill up that other half of the flag there. =)
-Second thing is the hands on your astronaut. And boy, do I feel your pain. >_< I'm no artist, but I like drawing, and yikes... The hands always trip me up. Here they seem a little... Off. I'm not sure what to tell you really, they just don't seem to fit. Sorry if that's a little vague. ._.
-Last thing is the stars in the background. (Assuming they are stars!) It's a great addition and I'm glad you added so many of them. The only thing is... They seem a little over-powered by the foreground picture which is quite a bit brighter than these burning balls of space-gas. Perhaps running a few stars through photoshop with a slight, bright glow setting? Just to make 'em stand out a little bit.
I really can't find anything else worth noting here. Excellent work overall! I can tell this was done free-hand with some love. =D
(P.S: Feel free to shoot me down on any of these if they don't line up. o7 ) _________________ And I find, on my way to death and happiness, that my heroes, my heroes dress in black.
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| | | Proudnoob4
Posts : 49 Join date : 2015-06-13
| Subject: Re: Art Critique Please ! Sun Oct 02, 2016 10:12 pm | |
| @"IIHawkerII" Yes i do see the hands are tiny, Very tiny i do have to account to that next time Thanks!, And i do see the letters are kinda off i tried to simulate that its kinda farther back than the 'G' but i think i did not simulate that well, Thanks for that too. And the stars was a brush i found on the internet lol, so next time ill just do those individually next time i do a space setting, Thank you for the Critique _________________ |
| | | Tr3ach3ry
Posts : 336 Join date : 2014-03-27 Age : 33 Location : Forge world Mars
| Subject: Re: Art Critique Please ! Sun Oct 02, 2016 10:38 pm | |
| A little bit more movement .The pose is kinda stiff and bigger hands .Everything esle ish oke. Still better than what i can draw , alot better. |
| | | Proudnoob4
Posts : 49 Join date : 2015-06-13
| Subject: Re: Art Critique Please ! Sun Oct 02, 2016 10:39 pm | |
| - Tr3ach3ry wrote:
- A little bit more movement .The pose is kinda stiff and bigger hands .Everything esle ish oke.
Still better than what i can draw , alot better. Movement is pretty stiff i must admit gotta do some more studies on posture, Thanks ! _________________ |
| | | RaidSnake
Posts : 88 Join date : 2014-03-02 Age : 31 Location : France, Paris
| Subject: Re: Art Critique Please ! Mon Oct 03, 2016 1:00 pm | |
| yes, better hands, bigger! but I like the idea and the character! _________________ |
| | | Tr3ach3ry
Posts : 336 Join date : 2014-03-27 Age : 33 Location : Forge world Mars
| Subject: Re: Art Critique Please ! Fri Oct 07, 2016 7:56 pm | |
| - Proudnoob4 wrote:
- Tr3ach3ry wrote:
- A little bit more movement .The pose is kinda stiff and bigger hands .Everything esle ish oke.
Still better than what i can draw , alot better. Movement is pretty stiff i must admit gotta do some more studies on posture, Thanks ! No probs . There are a lot of tutorials on how to add ...some kind of motion to the drawing .But eventually you will get the hang of it . |
| | | SpookyBees
Posts : 14 Join date : 2015-04-19 Age : 24
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| Subject: Re: Art Critique Please ! Thu Oct 13, 2016 11:44 am | |
| Really cool man! Hands are a bit disproportionate but I think it's really cool! _________________ |
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