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PostSubject: rise of the fallen (sneak peek)   Sun Apr 19, 2015 6:18 pm

ok so im working on a new story called rise of the fallen its about a race called the degu and a race called wolvengaurds both of which were pushed to extinction but return to fight to reclaim what they was once the story fallows a fallen squad called dragon squad and their fight in the war and the people they meet along the way and the people they lose they main character actually has no name and will remain that way and the story is told through his words
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PostSubject: Re: rise of the fallen (sneak peek)   Sun Apr 19, 2015 6:31 pm

Looks interesting is this races are alien races ? because i like the names looks like alien names
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PostSubject: Re: rise of the fallen (sneak peek)   Sun Apr 19, 2015 6:50 pm

@overwatch029 wrote:
ok so im working on a new story called rise of the fallen its about a race called the degu and a race called wolvengaurds both of which were pushed to extinction but return to fight to reclaim what they was once the story fallows a fallen squad called dragon squad and their fight in the war and the people they meet along the way and the people they lose they main character actually has no name and will remain that way and the story is told through his words

That's one long sentence! :p But it sound interesting. I know this is a sneak peak of yours, but are some questions allowed? :)

Who or what, pushed both those races to the brink of extinction?

In what way are the squad fallen? Fallen from grace like Lucifer? (Referring to satan in the bible.)

The war they fight in, is it a new war, or is it the same war that brought them close to extinction? (if war is the reason for them being close to it.)

If the main character don't have a name, how then, will his squad call out to him? What role does the main char have in the squad? Is he the chief, the scout or the water-boy?

Just asking cuz it sounds interesting and I would like to know a bit more.

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PostSubject: Re: rise of the fallen (sneak peek)   Sun Apr 19, 2015 9:13 pm

This sounds really good man! I'm really excited to see what you can make out of this Smile

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PostSubject: Re: rise of the fallen (sneak peek)   Sun Apr 19, 2015 9:20 pm

well the race that destroyed them both is the reion a race of greedy and evil lizards and the wolven are like werewolves only without transforming and the degu are sorta like humans but with blue and white dragon scales on their body and both wolven and degu are like samurai in the way they live and fight with honer and they lost due to being outnumbered

the squad is fallen because that is the name of their army after being almost extinct the degu and wolven unite as the fallen

the war is simple after the reion thought the degu and wolven were dead they split into 2 the canquetor and the falock and both are at war and when the war is at its hightest point the fallen start to rise out of their caves

the main character is just a simple soldier telling his story through a diary and ive labled him in the part where the main story begins as the unknown soldier
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PostSubject: Re: rise of the fallen (sneak peek)   Sun Apr 19, 2015 10:55 pm

this sounds very interesting, Overwatch
you have an interesting dynamic and well chosen names for them
however, may I suggest you don't use that blue, but a lighter one?
like this cyan blue instead?
it's very hard to read dark blue...
just a suggestion Smile
I hope you'll eventually post fragments of your story here Thumbs Up
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PostSubject: Re: rise of the fallen (sneak peek)   Sun Apr 19, 2015 11:37 pm

oh yes i will be posting many parts of it here just for u guys because my book will only be sold in wales and some parts of Ireland the name of the post will be rise of the fallen and every monday ill post a new part

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PostSubject: Re: rise of the fallen (sneak peek)   Mon Apr 20, 2015 5:32 am

@overwatch029 wrote:
well the race that destroyed them both is the reion a race of greedy and evil lizards and the wolven are like werewolves only without transforming and the degu are sorta like humans but with blue and white dragon scales on their body and both wolven and degu are like samurai in the way they live and fight with honer and they lost due to being outnumbered

the squad is fallen because that is the name of their army after being almost extinct the degu and wolven unite as the fallen

the war is simple after the reion thought the degu and wolven were dead they split into 2 the canquetor and the falock and both are at war and when the war is at its hightest point the fallen start to rise out of their caves

the main character is just a simple soldier telling his story through a diary and ive labled him in the part where the main story begins as the unknown soldier

Thanks for the answer and for explaining the story elements more in detail. It sounds really interesting. I'm looking forward to your monday updates :)
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