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Legate Lanius

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PostSubject: Short breath (A really short poem)   Thu Dec 29, 2016 9:16 am

I thought the air was pressing down my chest like a cinder block

Slowly I take in the deep essence of life before letting go again

The atmosphere is loaded with radiation

One by one the particles hit me like a punch to the face

I am slowly fading away

Hyperventilation
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PostSubject: Re: Short breath (A really short poem)   Thu Dec 29, 2016 5:46 pm

@Legate Lanius Very well done for such a short poem. In fact I can see it being used in a Fallout Fan Fiction. Maybe if I write one I'll mention this poem if you don't mind.

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PostSubject: Re: Short breath (A really short poem)   Tue Feb 14, 2017 9:47 pm

@Legate Lanius Its creepy but in a good way
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